Refreshing the Window
It’s inevitable
We’ve uploaded a lot
Just to update our relationship
Now
The bytes per second got slower
Surfing took longer
We could not search immediately
Our windows opening with agonizing pace
You just
Smiled
A powerful refresh
I just stopped looking at the computer
Just stopped
You opened a new window
I was refreshed
After all the fuss about uploads and pop-ups
Everything was reloaded anew
You
Smiling.
Seasons
When you serve the best coffee
It is summer
You give me a new tie
It is autumn
You slap me for looking at another
It is winter
You forgive me
It is spring
You cook me bacon and toast
It is summer
You are sulky silent
It is autumn
You sleep with your back to me
It is winter
You hug me
It is spring.
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You have a nice style. I really enjoyed the first poem and how you compare it to a computer.
Thanks for stopping by.
You’re welcome. I enjoyed my visit to you blog too, and will come back. Yeah, I think, being surrounded by computers and all, some relationships get too cluttered with too many concerns that the couple might forget about each other’s needs. A smile can bring it all back, don’t you agree?
refreshing the window makes me smile
That I like too. Have a good one, okay? Mwah.
hahaha…
luv the “season”
nice one…
cheers
Thanks, happy that you are.
Refreshing the Window’s great. I love the analogy with the computer.
Thank you, Brainteaser. I guess many relationships have so many uploads they can’t keep up with each other.
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hi, tomachfive! i do love “refreshing window.” got the link from brainteaser. i was smiling when i got to end of the poem.
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You’re welcome, and I’ll come back promise. I will check those sites, no worries. Take care and God bless.
I love your style. Very unique, with a lot of plays on words and imagination galore! Great job!