Poem Inspired By A Post

This poem is inspired by a Post by Brainteaser, a wonderful sharing that I believe you will enjoy reading, just click this link. I dub mine as:

Hope for Reunion

There is a bittersweet feeling when we revisit the places where we thought the world was ours

The leaves, the air, the colors, sang to us, exulting in our innocence

Is it when we lost innocence, we also lost them?

That when we return, they fall silent, intimidated by our changes?

And smile no more?

Then let us replay their memory

So they will be reborn

And remember

Us

Let that tear of melancholic joy of recall fall

So as We stand together on that green field

They will recognize us running

And hug us so tight

Begging us not to leave ever again

Though we must sail, we must tread, we must fly once more.

5 Comments

  1. lXKlSd great site man thanks http://peace.com

  2. A thoughtful mini-treatise with the following killer line..:)

    “Let that tear of melancholic joy of recall fall”

    It just rolls off the tongue; I love the lyrical sound of it!

    Hope you are well and happy..

    Really? than I am happy. For you and for us. You too, may you be happy, healthy, and well as well. Mwah.

  3. Beautifully done.
    kim

    Mwah!

  4. Hello Tom!

    I am so humbled that my simple post could inspire the poet in you.

    That’s one thing I love about visiting blogs — I learn many things, and I get inspirations. Three of my latest poems were inspired by blog posts. Amazing, isn’t it?

    Your poem’s very powerful. It makes me want to go home again. :-)

    —Sherma
    http://www.brainteaser.wordpress.com

    Ah, but you do inspire. And going home is a visit to another world of delights and bittersosweet memories. Take care Sherma. :)

  5. tom,
    you have such a way of snaking into a person’s heart and soul with your poetry. this brought tears to my eyes.
    sarah

    Aw, Sarah, let me hug you with these words.


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